Monday, 20 April 2020
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Hi Kaleb - Mrs W here. Wow that is an action packed story. Not sure it would have been much fun in the sewer - smelly!!!!? I wonder what the African adventure will be for Kaleb and Chris? I look forward to reading it too.
ReplyDeleteHi Kaleb. It's Michelle. That was so exciting, I really enjoyed the part when they say the red beady eyes, it made me feel scared for Kaleb and Chris. I am also looking forward to the next adventure in Africa, what creatures will they see there I wonder?
ReplyDeleteGreat job.
Michelle
there might be another one .
ReplyDeleteCool!
DeleteHi Kaleb, I was sitting on the edge of my seat reading your action packed story. I love how you know so much about dinosaurs, I could really picture those beady red eyes. I would love to learn about what happens to Kaleb and Chris in Africa.
ReplyDeleteKaleb, this is awesome work, you have a great imagination and it is really good to see you putting your thoughts into your writing. Would really like to know what happens next, will we see more of this story? I love that you are using your describing words to enhance your writing. This really keeps the reader interested.
ReplyDeleteGreat work Kaleb!
Mrs T