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Wednesday, 26 August 2020

writing with patrick.



hi our task was to choose a setting and write five senses.Then we had to work with people that did the same setting as you so me and Patrick wrote five paragraphs  then introduce our monster next we  had to write a problem and solution each finally we linked it to the slide.Enjoy
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3 comments:

  1. Izaak27 August 2020 at 10:33

    hi giys i like the writing you mast of pot a lot of effort in to it wall dan. nex time you coed have a bicha look at it before you publish it. but apart from that it is amazing i love it.

    from izaak :]

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  2. Vitolio28 August 2020 at 12:20

    hi kaleb its me vitolio
    i really like the way your title is pick a path and i really like the way your writing has detail and information i really like reading your writing
    you reminded me on that picture yesterday. maybe next time you could add more writing.

    From vitolio(:

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  3. Michelle2 September 2020 at 11:40

    Hi Kaleb and Patrick
    I really enjoyed your story, I especially liked the way that you could choose to read it by clicking on the link. Great, exciting story with good detail and you kept me hooked right to the end. Please please add full stops in there in many places, I did get a little confused at times. Great team work boys.
    Michelle

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