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Thursday, 13 June 2019

the cockpit a story by Kaleb

I can see millions of glowing gadgets gladly lighting up a empty cockpit for freddy. There are clouds as white as snow. There is a sun as bright as lava. There is water as blue as sapphires. Freedy is trying to control the rocket or plane. Soon he will land in great britain to meet the queen. Hi My name is Kaleb. Here is my description. Tell me what you like about it?

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