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Tuesday, 7 August 2018

sumary text of the amazing humans


Kaleb R
This week we are reading The amazing Humans it is about these 3 space traverler space kids they won a competition and the prize was a epic space adventure to planet zealon to see the zoo but the zellonite zoo keeper that kidnaped them and they were trapped in  exhibit then a beevack appeared and it had dug a tunnel then they jumped through the tunnel and disappeared

2 comments:

  1. i really admire this because you tell me what happened in the story
    i think a better choice ma be puting your words can on the screan
    i remember doing something simailer because i was in your group.

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  2. Thanks for the feedback Daniel :)

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